Storeroom Greengrassi Slytherin
Posts : 124 Age : 30 Join date : 2010-03-27 Location : I'm Roes. Or am I?
| Subject: Random Poem Im posting for Bellers to see cause for some reason she cant recieve PM's.... Thu May 06, 2010 10:02 pm | |
| This is for an english assignment... its aboot evolution
In another day everything is different
Everything has to change
It happens all around us
Without it we wouldn’t be alive
Like a mighty oak tree
Grown up from just a sapling
The oak tree’s leaves ripple just like the river
Like a great flowing river
over flown by white rapids
the rivers white rapids flow into the sea
Like a vast sandy beach
The evolved from a stony ridge
The sandy stone beach is in peace like the forest
The key to everything around us
Is change | |
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Bellatrix Molestrange Slytherin
Posts : 287 Join date : 2010-03-14 Location : ...Azkaban?
| Subject: Re: Random Poem Im posting for Bellers to see cause for some reason she cant recieve PM's.... Thu May 06, 2010 10:18 pm | |
| I like it! Then again, I like almost everything I read, so you may want a second opinion...
I like the last line "The key to everything around us is change" n_n | |
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Storeroom Greengrassi Slytherin
Posts : 124 Age : 30 Join date : 2010-03-27 Location : I'm Roes. Or am I?
| Subject: Re: Random Poem Im posting for Bellers to see cause for some reason she cant recieve PM's.... Thu May 06, 2010 10:30 pm | |
| Thankssss! | |
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